alright, well yea todd, for being new here that was pretty good, maybe look up spelling on some words, like subpoena. your rap also was one of the best with humor ive seen in a while.

Copy Copy, u rap like a xerox machine

i like that line right there the most. good battle for ya.

and um clockwyse... wow my advice to you is use more lines and also write sentences that make sense when you put them together not just random shit all put into one paragraph...also spelling more than half of the words in your rap correctly would really help out... a lot.

vote--- todd.