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Old 11-11-07, 02:59 PM   #21
HELLonEARTH
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Voted For: Fly-E

Another Fly-E/ Rookie bout....

Fly-E: Another typical verse. A lot of your shit sounds the same, so I'd be careful, some of your lines sound recycled, but maybe thats just because they all sound alike. A long, slight punch filled verse. Again, nothing personal, except the 300JG line, which was pretty good. You multis are getting much better though.
Score: 6

sin-scere: You opened with a descent personal, then it all jsut fell off. Tweet? Corny? Come on son, spit more complex. Your form is a little off, structure a little strange, but not bad. Punches didn't amount to much.
Score: 3

Keep workin'
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