Originally Posted by Tha_Don_of_Mics

It wasn't- destined to be, let it rest in the sea..
we were doomed when I saw in you the reflection of me...
to lessen the sting, I prayed and confessed it to be..
rested to breathe, and in the end chased sex as a feind...
My favorite line through out the whole thing...
blessed is she, a soul murdered in the second degree..
my essence is key, numb to life, so in effort to sing...
----^ i was feeling this entire set of words, very deep and soulful
I shun my life run by fright to avoid it again..
wall off my heart so it won't get destroyed in the wind...

It wasn't- all I could do, after all i've been through..
fallin' for two, but in my dreams I keep callin' for you...
i'm lonely now, it's only how you console me now..
that holds me down from the rapture that calls my name...
it all sounds lame and insane but the pain in my brain..
exclaimin' for change strains to arrange blades to my veins..
and I try to resist, wake up from the dream findin' my fists...
at sides in a clinch, just a dream, truth I can find in the mist..
I was feeling how it was a dream, I felt like this before.
A good read, you should do longer version's if you get a chance. But great poem.

- Comments please.


by the way...will you...umm marry me?