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Old 11-25-03, 06:40 PM   #15
Aisle Phive
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Both Had Great Verses.. But Twisted Ayngel Had A Great View On It.. She Did A Lot More With The Topic. And I Especially Like These Lines..

Theres more good things just to outweigh the bad,
Great memories amongst the bad ones we've had,
They told me, look, you've got a man that loves you,
Do you want to hurt him by what you're about to do?
You love him, we see it in your eyes, the way they shine,
Everyone dies eventually, and now is NOT your time

Filed You Had A Good Verse As Well.. And Your Rhyme Scheme Was Flawless.. But Twizted Just Came Better And More To The Point.

Vote- Twisted.
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