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Old 08-06-04, 06:51 PM   #7
JPoll
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breakdown...

wig...decent beat...at par...poor flow...not great punches...you're too loud in the mic while rapping then too quiet during your outro...decent at best...off beat alot...it sounded like you just wrote it and then chose a beat...and it didn't match up...vanilla ice line was wack...bad quality...you need to settle down...chris reeves lines are so fucking played too

vendetta...good punches...nice first 3 bars especially...good flow except in 2 place...i liked the i'll teach you wordplay bit...good quality...nice hook i fuckin love jedi mind tricks...that was sick...second verse was less good...it was enough to win though...threads lose line was good...split your wig was pretty nice...


vote vendetta
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