Voted For: Kirk

Kirk
I'll leave this bitch with a red neck when he's comin' to pound me,
You think you can really git er' done but I'm still wonderin' 'how d?'
PURE OWNAGE!!
They say behind every great man is a great woman, well since this is true,
Please, tell this dude to get the fuck outta my way when I'm dissin' you,
PURE OWNAGE!!
My shit is blowin' your mind, you're showin' a sign of tryna think sir,
You tryna grab the win, but that shits slippin' right through your fingers,
PURE OWNAGE!!
Dude thinks hes a perfectionist, well that ideal will crush him much faster,
Gettin' smaller the more I smokin him is the only thing that Dutch Masters,
PURE OWNAGE!!
Tryna get your foot in the door of the rap game, well thats an obstacle,
Cause when I drop my verse and defeat you, how will that be possible?
PURE OWNAGE!!
And in this life you think you'll make it, my lines will severe every man,
This bitch must be livin' in a dream world though, his punches never-never land.
PURE OWNAGE!!

WOW!! 10/10 A++ AMAZING!!

dutch
i'm on top.. you just the MIDDLE OF FAME
dude couldnt "sun me"(son me) if the KID WAS A FLAME!! 1
Whack.
have him "hit man" but this aint VIDEO GAMEZ!!
dont even know wut he 'hit-by' dudes 'spits-dry' like SKIDDLEZ IN RAIN!! 2
Whack.
i'm bout tah be MORE DORMANT..PSYKE!! have the FOURS SCORCHIN DYKEZ
this "dude hammered" like THOR STORIN MIGHT!! 3
Whack.
he SO BORIN RIGHT??
got his "shots stopped" like a WHOLE WAR IN STRIKE!! 4
Whack.
when i DECIDE TAH BURST EIGHT.. he'll DIE THE WORST WAY
or be "runnin home" like this GUYS AT THIRD BASE!! 5
Whack.
got him "all pinned"(pin doll) flip that and he wonderin WHY THE CURSE STAYZ!!
just call it "easy pickin" like a FLYIN BIRD HAZE!! 6
Whack.

This was whack. It's a good thing you numbered your lines though!! Good job on that part. SKIDDLEZ IN RAIN!! <--That was ILL AS FUCK but the set up sucked so it was whack.

Vote: Kirk, he edged this with wicked multies.