Myself - you did a dope job with this i liked how you got the articles and pictures to put the words you wrote into greater context. thios increased the level of relevance and emotion in this piece and i thought that was pretty dope. i thought the vocab level was adequate for the desired effect of the piece. good drop

Kool - it was funny and you made an ok attempt at the topic, but it just wasn't enough to take this at all in my opinion.

vs/ Myself