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Originally Posted by Premanition
wot the fuck ^^^^^
graphically wack... <<this is forced, forcing multi's are bad tsk tsk..
scratchin your tracks <<is multi
detachin ur back <<is multi
^^^^these aren't multis?..<<not enough in ya bars..4 per bar minimum
damn get this herb out of here
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission
^^assanasance ryhmin....no multi's
Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt
Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt
^^lol, but no multis
Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see
Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy
^^^.lol, k theres no multi's in here..?.?.?..srry fam..
Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks...
Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked...
^^1st line was aight 2nd fell off from ryhme scheme
Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue...
Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo...
^^no multis in that bar at all, look at it n you'll see prem
Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin...
I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin...
^^1st bar was good but 2nd fell off....
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match ya syllables up...remember 4 to a bar,
i have yet to see any1 do that yet n not stretch
there bars to 3 lines or more......
prem you got this but only cuz you had a couple multi's.
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to four lines