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Old 02-11-05, 06:28 PM   #10
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
From: East Coast
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I be quick to give premantions I split emcees like-fision
Only dreams u cud invision winning but that’s not my mission
****ehh dcent but not good
Dawg ya verse needs work, cause new methed brings the hurt
Bury 6ft in dirt, ya lines older den the cum stains on cali’s ya shirt
***not really sure if this is good, but i guess ok
Ya aint walking-by-me, be cause im just too-high-see
Don’t lie-b ima burn ya music and I don’t mean piracy
**i like the punch but ya choice of multies was bad


Graphically Wack Im Scratchin Your Tracks While Cuttin Your Slacks...
Lyrically Lack Im Detatchin Your Back, Vertibrae Unfragilely Unstacked...
****dcent, bunch of big words no real punch though
Out With The Old In With The New? You Make That Phase Very Untrue...
Up Goes The Fuss That 'U Through', Walk In Ur Shoe? Barefoot Sounds Coo...
***punch very funny...lead up was lacking
Freestylin You Improvisin, Then Fat Joe Exercisin And Einstein Revisin...
I See You Cryin, Only Newbs Takin Ur Lie-In So Ya Image Rapidly Dyin...
***1st line hot, the rest was ok...

gotta vote prem on this one