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Old 06-22-07, 09:38 PM   #6
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Mav. You have been suspended from this league.

However, the decision of you being booted. Is not yet determined
I actually haven't seen that line myself, and even though feeble
agreed that the line was in fact bitten. I STILL need a link.

Now,

To the members of this league. I am working on resolving this matter. If you happen to know link. Please pm me.

Unfortunately for Apartheid, Mav. is not booted yet. So this battle is good. Both battlers have dropped, and this is battle is ready for votes...





So, with all that said.



Apartheid

you paint the picture to biting, son ya fagget rhymes aint hittin me
last week we saw what this Nancy Drew....and it looked like Mystery

I thought this line was good at first. Cuz i thought you were referring
to him biting from mystery. However, the link you put in was to the mag
So that threw me off a lil. none the less. ok wordplay. ok punch


funny thing is i can write completely wack, my punches wont be your defeat
because the highlight of this battle, is you being BOOTED FROM THE LEAGUE!
This was ok. Its actually a bit played though, and the concept in general wasn't really harsh. BUT, i do think you worded it nicely, maybe not as much
in the set up...but the finish line was good.



.vs

Nothin from mav

I think this whole verse, was actually yours. None of it was bitten. Cuz all of it sucked
Terrible wording in everyone of your lines. Your structure needs help bad. Everyones
told you over and over. Quit with all the..................dots! Concepts were simple.
Nothing really effective. Or even close to being ok.


Weak battle. Apart you didn't really come that hard. I felt you were trying to be
a little too cocky. None of your bars were good this week. Just 2 ok quoteables
that simply had potential, but didn't follow through. If mav. would have bit 1 GOOD
line, he would have have won this. Now, i'm not saying i'm with biting, because i think
its fucking wack. Anyone who has to steal someone elses lines/lyrics. Is a herb in my book, and yes Mav. that means i think your a herb. If its true. I actually have yet to
see you deny it. .....Anyways


O yeah, fuck.


v/Apart
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