Voted For: ~Souljah~
~Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief I’m eager to beef,
nothing special really
I’ve never been taught to be cautious
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
ok line but a played concept
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies
wack line
plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
this line wa sprobably my favotire out of all of them
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
ok line ur coming played though
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||
your best line but it doesnt flow but my favorite line by far
OVERALL YOU NEED TO ELEVATE RHYME SCHEME IS WEAK LAST LINE DIDNT FLOW STRUCTURE IS HORRIBLE AND THERE WERE ONLY WEAK PERSONALS ELEVATE
You're as sick as what?......don't try feed me these lies
Tryna hide the fact that you "don't make the grade" like a "D"-sguise
PRETTY COOL LINE
Me duck???that's like the pot calling the fucking kettle black
Your flow's absurd like a fat chick under the rainbow like "where's my skittles at?"
LOL I LIKED THIS LINE NICE
The title of wack stick's to you like metal curves to horse hooves
Wack at everything, you ain't even top of your game at false truths*OK LINE NOTHING SPECIAL
I could strap a boulder to my leg and drown, you'd still be far below
Your rhymes scheme's a joke at your expense like the bar below
OK LINE
Question time: what goes quack, snap and bends over at will
Answer: hoe show breakin his back to duck, through minus skill
COOL CLOSER MY FAVORITE LINE BY FAR PROPS
OK OVERALL YOU FLOW IS BETTER BUT UR STRUCTURE WAS FUCKED IN PARTS TOO I WAS DISSAPOINTED IN THE LACK OF PERSONALS BUT U HAD COOL WORDPLAY SO PROPS
PLEASE RTF AND VOTE FOR ONE OF THE RAP GAME TRACKS TO BE FEATURED OR I WILL DQ MY VOTE
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