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Old 04-08-04, 01:38 PM   #12
YoungStar*
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From: that Austin Tex 512 reppin Kileen to tha fullest
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its like u walkin up da stairway 2 heaven da way ur stepin up 2 da greatest//
u pickin up an "L" to a god so theres no reason to hate this//
-nice opener...got me interested in his flo...y axe wud git a L to a god

I bust more SIC flows than you can flow when your SICK//
your like a constipated kid on a toilet, ur never dropin ill shit//
-i liked this bar..first line liked tha wordplay...second line had me thinkin... nice shitt

on R.B im a legend with my words, "W's comin so fast dey pass blurs//
you might think im ur neighborhood pusher the way i bag these herbs//
-one of tha best bars in this verse...good flo, but tha first line wuz confusin..at first..i caught it l8r

gotta make an alias 2 win,but like Butcha n Toon ull b placed on suspension//
cuz my abstract thoughts will overtake ur adolescent intentions//
good vocab on this one...i guess that wuz a punch??shoulda came harder tho..not tha best bar

if u got a weak stomach dont bite,ull find my rhymes hard 2 digest//
n even if u plagerized u still couldnt win,so how u eva gonna progress//
GOOD PUNCHES...liked tha vocab-u sed plagerized instead of common word like "bite"

when push cums 2 shove not even M.C Hammer could touch this lyricist//
on R.B i just be fukin around and still leavin these kids with cyphilis//
damn..not tha STD syphiliis..that's harsh..good closer
OVERALL-nice vocab and wordplay..a few points lost on punches...i give it a 7/10

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