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Old 05-30-08, 11:46 PM   #8
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

we could give a fuck about yung, so 'fm' and im not talkin' frequencies
he loves being served nuts so much...he rides airlines frequently
he's never viewed ''walk hard''...yet he lives to jock 'dewey cocks'
only time he'd drop a gem is when he flips his moms jewelry box


vs.

nothing.


SV glad to see a simple key from you is still doper than your opponents best..haha..i wont critique so much becuz it was just a key..therefore im guessing you know your mistakes....and your quotables were pretty eye catching..

medikated..idk what u were trying to do with this verse ...but if you were trying to throw good punches..you failed....nah seriously though...your structure was hard to create a flow...it seemed you were more into creating a hype for your punch..than actually delivering your punch with good meaning...no hate..

v/ SV
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