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Old 07-19-04, 11:52 PM   #25
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l.i. you had actually a nice verse with good flow and average structure your lines could be shorter..
you stayed on topic well and this won you the battle..you just beat them by a tiny bit..not much dont brag..
lol 8.5/10

apo..i like what you got going on with your structure rhyme evryother line and it was honestly pretty great props on that..your verse was all around nice..proud of you man..but i felt li did better with this wack topic lol
8.2/10

meta..you structure was good and you had me..well that is untill the end a lil after half waay through u lost me..u kinda sunk off topic..they both only beat you by a hair apo's vesre was barely better than you..


overall 8.0/10
didnt come hard enought my vote L.I.
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