i left this feed on ya youtube pageVVV rtf on a track of mine

black president, still no changes! thanx for spittin some dope shit. ya quality needs help for sure, but this is dope. flow stays on point the whole time, kids gettin shot, i know where the grave is. i'mma say a line like that.
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of course the quality needs mixed on ya vocals, but besides that, u could extend your rhymin words a little bit more to put more swag on it, so it'd be catchier for the pop people who'd rather not listen to real shit. gotta trick'um ya dig

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