not bad........

drama queen prolly has the most flawless structure in this drop i have ever seen, the flow was spot on all the way through. you delivered a nice piece right here, gud imagery as always and you beefed it up with some tight vocabs dropping them consistently. i seen this topic before and i've seen drama queens approach before, still it was delivered nicely and there was good emotion in the piece, overall the only downside is that the approach itself has been done before.

keysha, took an original approach to it, something i aint seen but the structure was too text like and the flow was not consistent enough, it got choppy in places. i think that your piece lacked the kind of emotion that DQ's did and that really ruined it, the imagery was there but nothing overly good. some nice vocabs in places but the real main fault with your piece is it wasn't consistent enough.

V/ - Drama Queen.

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