aiight damn it's a pity you didn't get more feedback. I usually don't read these stuffs like I told you, but this was real good. I really enjoyed it. like that opener line:
His hand was clutching mine tighter, apparent Katrina was on course
I’d always been a fighter, but this “woman” was one of a greater force

i was like "Damn, that's tight", like how you called the hurrican woman, cuz of the name. shit was dope. loved that part. and also, it's dope to see you doing somethin' like this for the hurricane stuff. But I aldso liked how you did the part wit the wife then the husband. That was nice. You had nice vocab, and story was nice. I was actually picturin' how this would have looked. lol I jus wish you would have made it longer, cuz I would have read it too. ~_~ and maybe even put a third verse in from the childrens perspective. But overall, really nice piece. Keep it up. really liked it. stay up. pc. one. 9.5/10

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