Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too
cool concept, wording was good enough but cud've been improved just to make it a little more hard-hitting. basically, it shows that you still shaking the rust off.

Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at
lol, wording was nice.. swag was nice to

It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags
a year or so ago this would've been nice. you've been away too long though so you prolly don't realise that this shit is played now. although, on RV its prolly still considered to be a monster punch.


Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse
nice reference, wording could be worked a little better.. overall the punch was solid enough but not really a banger.

Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted
same as the mag shit, its played now. but on this site, who knows?

Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight
rofl. a flip on some shit that's been said many times.. but it still works because it is still SO RELEVANT! the truth of this is what makes it sound more harsh than it actually is. you took a regular statement and made it sound vicious.

I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky
ehh, I get the wordplay in this.. that is ok, but really I don't like the concept in general and the wording just makes it sound readable, but lacking anything that really makes it hit home.


An up and down verse, a couple of played spots that your time off has left you guilty of. overall there were some glimpses of the old Mimesis beastly mojo, but still the rust is showing a small bit. I'm pretty sure that a battle or two more and you'll be back into full swing on this shit.

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