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Old 04-05-09, 07:14 PM   #7
JTR
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You should be set on hiding your face to cover up your recent scars
You’re the only one who can post a 50 line verse with only 3 decent bars
lmao, im feeling this +1
I’ll smack down your lame internet punch lines you been talking for years
When I leave him e-wrecked, just know that it’s not my fault he’s a queer
lol this had potential but I didnt feel it was hard enough
There is nothing hetero about the places you be sticking your dick in
Bob in pussy is something that only happens when fishing with kittens
nah
This dude is weak, the ones who think he has a chance are clearly not stable
If you were the star choice, you wouldn’t be at home watching basic cable
cool concept, not good wording
I was hoping you would turn a new leaf, giving you lots of luck and hope
But knowing this guy, it’s prolly already been chopped up and smoked
lmao i'd quote this but dude, you smoke the bud that flowers, not he leaves...
No one really even likes or will spend quality time with this limited herb
Cause If bob is hosting a weekender, it just means he finished his verse
this was ok but I can't quote it though

vs.

150 is what I aim after, because I'm tired of these fake rappers..
must be confused since the answer to you losing is 'way' backwords..
nah not feeling this one
relax sir... cause all them concepts are cheesy you run with
I believe in second chances..
...........thats why you AND final should be in the jump bitch!
lol nah I aint feeling this it wasnt hard to me
how does a tie mean you both win? blamed it on non-reading faggots
so hush hush when you magged it.. I almost forgot it even happened!
more like a statement then a punch
only half of it.. a main arena aint what your gonna get me out of..
your verse is wack, shits more of a circus act than brittany's album
cool +1
your face i'm quickly pounding.. I'm bigger, i've been the best
juicing your head, just cause you'll never see me, necta neck
nah too forced
hahaaa i'm ending this... you should ask coke to come support ya
couldn't be selling grams pimping on your mothers mothers corner
[b]this shit is stupid but funny and I liked it +2[b]

I feel like honestly, one way had better concepts to work with and coulda won, but he really needs to work on his wording, he needs to make a correlation within his set-up and his punch following the set up, along with wording the actual punch to be harder. Bob seems to be more seasoned regarding this aspect, and thats what makes me give him this. His shit despite having weaker and more played out concepts imo, was worded nicer, more swagg and emotion, a lil more comedic

good battle to both though

v/bob
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