This was dope, very creative, and the transition from line to line was great, nice use of wrdplay and vocab to up the power of this peice.. This is the first peice of your i peeped and it is dope as fuck, i will not sleep no longer on your work........



These illusions in my dreams are really full of confusion...
Un-Provin delusions of un-amusin images now un-loosened...
Great wrdplay and nice use of meta's and good imagery


I’d think at times the only way for it to disapear is to do suicide...
But every night its crystal clear that there’s no use to undo my life..
So i’ll just have to live with the sufferin and the horrible dreams...
N have people think I lived a happy life, wen that ain’t wut it seems...
Loved the ending, very nice and very deep.

I would rate this a 9 out of 10

and this is one of the best open mics i read this month.....

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