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Old 08-20-07, 11:24 AM   #122
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Originally Posted by F.oo
Us..

When I first met you I could feel vivid emotions.
Scents of body lotions, and eyes blue as oceans.
My notions and intentions of us together were great..
The late phonecalls at night inbetween daily dates.
Nothing else could realate, to the feelings inside me..
And the way you always found ways, to really suprise me.
But I started to see, the love we had was lacking fun..
And It seemed that what had sprung was acctually done.
But we were still young, what really did we know?
With hands intertwined, but still nowhere to go..
And nothing to show for all the days we had spent..
A relationship with the intent of becomming torment.
Till it reached it's decent, and the feelings broke..
With tempers provoked, we parted on a terrible note.
And we've barely spoke since those days of our love.
It's left me deprived of what my life consists of..
Walking out of a thing I enjoyed from the beginning..
With an imprinting I'll cherish as long as I'm living.



now u drop a verse???
should of did that in our section when u tryed out...

but yea good luck with this....
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