yea nice man more like a song but thats aight i felt the concept u made this piece is very good man nice vocab usage nice flow and structure and i really like the idea of a hustla's dream it would be way better if it just didnt have a hook cuz it can be just felt straight through wit out it and if u have hurrd that new song by sunN.Y. its called" Soul of a hustler" and its just straight spittin so this song shuld be like that well good job on this man keep up the good work ok

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