Pretty good man. Flow was good, not great, can be worked on a bit. Had some multi's, vocab was present, shit was right cuz.

Strengths-- It's obvious you got a bit of a vocabulary, so utilize it. You almost over did it in this piece tho.. seemed like some words were jus put in there as what I like to call "Show-Off Fillers". Flow was good man, jus tweak it a lil, fix it up. Multi's were your obvious strength in this one.

Negatives-- Structure wasn't all that great cuz, work on evening your lines and your flow might turn out to be great. Neva kno till you try eh? Hook was bad, didn't like it, needs reconstructin, na'mean?

Best Line (s):

chemically imbalanced by drugs....
slugs connect with foul links, think the worst
& be the first to make it happen, laughin through the chaos
check the unemployment lines, this's rap layoffs
brought on... by collective live electric nuerons
far beyond what you're on
^^ Dope string of lines there, with multi's galore, good shit.

Keep droppin cuz, you'll keep elevatin'

-Formula.

**Peep my open mic when I get it dropped, jus be on the look out for it aiight? Appreciate it.**

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