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Old 09-07-04, 04:08 AM   #9
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Voted For: Spektikul

ok verbal wins in vocab but thats it good story and nice structure good metas but you aint give me a good visualization and that what needs to be done to win topicals.
spec you shit needs better vocab but the story was fucking dope shit gave me the chills ending was official whole shit was fire good structure and words fell like a movie sun i never knew you was this fucking dope sun that shit was fire a 9/10 only vocab stopped it from being a 10/10
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