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Old 03-13-09, 08:13 PM   #8
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Kempo gave this jerk the boot, his custom title shows he's a nerd, it's true
You ain't just a man of steel cause you got guns -- it's how you get your verses too
Concept was there, but i felt this was worded badly. Just needed a bit of a touch up. ok though
Round 3 in KORV, the LBL -- I remember 'em, and you better believe that
There hasn't been 1 tournament or league you've EVER done better than me at
Lol, Cool. niiiicely worded.
It's the rematch. . I beat you already, so this is twice you've been slammed
You ain't breaking down my verse unless Final asks for help with writing the mags
again, very good wording. not real harsh, but effective
Cause I'm the type who'll smash ya dome, faggot I got a hold on this board
I'll make your Body Lie for so long Dicaprio will lose his starring role to your corpse
this was ok
Best believe we all think you're a faggot too, and I don't slow for nothin'
Your sexuality's so suspect the FBI had to put you at the top of the most wanted
no no no
Your hopes? Fuck 'em -- I'm a beast, the whole site knows this faggot's a waste
My punches'll make your spine so crooked you'd think the voting here is actually straight
i liked this. cool
I believe if you try you could be decent -- that's why I'ma keep you alive
You'll be in the jump so long you shouldn't have a problem with reaching the sky
no no no
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