wordness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

big props to my OG's, this was really good.......OSB, fuck you've evolved so much, probly that music i sent you .....seriously, i loved how your verse had such a harmonic flow, or whatever, everything seemed to rhyme, great multis which creates an excellent flow....and some lines were awesome, and stood out

Waving my fist as your hate begins to eclipse my love,
May I insist I attach this scripture to the wings of doves,
Act my fucking age? Thinking of you as I'm bickering on,
In a drunken rage listening to the angels singing a song,

^ my fav lines anyways.........really good piece man, we so have to do a collab soon (its just because im lazy, nah mean?) haha, but serioulsy, word

os1ris man, havn't read much of your shit, but this was pretty good....good flow, and great expression....you didn't really at the start, but towards the middle and end, you had good inners, which made it more interesting/flowed awesome.....word, you have some sweet talent my boy, keep up:

I'll get this shit off'a my motherfukin' shoulders yo
I've no more hope my woes have broken my will to cope

^ that line really stood out, there was a few more that were good too, but overall, it was really good.......word, keep up to both.....YAY!!!

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