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Old 10-26-04, 07:07 PM   #29
BkBrawla
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he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK:" PUNCH BUT PLAYED


compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK HOMIE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM "OK" CLOSA NOT AN GOOD PUNCH BUT "OK" CLOSA


LYRICAL HAVOK-YA LINES WAS AN BIT PLAYED,ADN PLUS YA FLOW IS MESSED UP,LINES TOO STRETCH,AND DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTIN IT,NOT CREATIVE ENOUGH ,SO ELEVATE ON FLOW,PUNCHES AND STRUTURE ALRIGHT






Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit
Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH GOOD OPENER




you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos"
5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM WEAK PUNCH LINES TO STRETCHA LIL BUT ITS COOL





I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins
Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win
Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts
I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT AIGHT GOOD FLOW,,,,NICE PUNCHES,,,,,,GOOD WORDPLAYS


RED-BEAM-U HAD AN "OK" VERSE AND GOOD PUNCHES


OVERALL=DIS AN CLOSE BATTLE IN MY EYES,BOTH OF YA HAD AN "OK" FLOWZ,,,,,,,,,AND SOME ELEVATIONS TO DO,BUT IT CAME DOWN TO PUNCHES AND RED BEAM PUNCHES CAME ALOT HARDER HE JUST EDGE IT A LIL

LYRICAL HAVOK-U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW,DA FLOW WAS A LIL MESSED UP,AND DA PUNCHES WERE TOO BASIC,NOT CREATIVE,

BUT KEEP BATTLIN AND KEEP DOING YA THANG~!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~WORD
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