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Old 02-19-05, 01:58 PM   #8
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I liked both these verses but i think hotshh takes this one.

Dex: I was feelin your verse but some of the punches weren't up to par like "damn shame he’ll just serve meal plates " brought down the quality of the line and you had a few of those. I also wasn't feelin that your multis rode all the way through your verse. Your closer didn't seem completely solid to me. I wasn't feelin the 3rd bar either.

Hotshh: We'll start with the fact that everything was completely multi'd on lines. Your punches weren't quite as hard as dex's but your multi's beat his out. They were still valid punches though. I was also feelint the punch on him bettin his money/your closer. your lines were consistently good

v/Hotshhh
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