^^ yeah everyone has to start somewhere,first attempt is never goin to be the best,ive just started recording..and ill admit im not to good at the moment..but im keep on writin and recording and hopefully get better

anyway, dunno what it was but i liked this track..i think 13th lost his flow in a few parts..but thats summat that can be worked on...the ends style is different..i think he came the best on the track..the hook was real catchy...and chrit like other people have said add some emotion...sometimes that can be the decider on weather a track is dope or not...you could have good lyrics but they gotta be presented right...know what i mean?....anyway thats just my thoughts on this song,