haha, someone else used an anamaniac punch....holla, im not the only person who was a kid once.....the beat is simple...sounds like fruity loops....i dont like it much...actually it gets boring quick....the lyrics are nice tho thats about the only upside to the track is the lyrics...the production is poor, very poor....use noise reduction.... that should help out that bad mic you got....it sounds like you were focusing too much on the words, and not saying them...lacks emotion...but the hook is catchy...and like i said your good with lyrics...it wont take much for you to up ya game...just get a lil better beats, and get cool edit if you dont got it already and take a lil time learning how to use it...and ya shit will sound ALOT better
you were on the beat the whole time and that does help it alot but lyrics and stayin on beat doesnt make a song specially with that constant hiss....4/10 till you get ya production up

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