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Old 06-16-07, 01:00 PM   #9
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I use precision, to bruise winnings, 2v's headin for the ditches
s'when I knock your block off, I'm takin out your city with it
1st line ok... 2ed weak...
known to break bones, drink a V8, gotta mind of a mobster
not saying 3 wins are slanted, there just aligned with your posture
decent...
the flows sickenin, listen kid...SILENCE >>> that what you trigger
nothings sparklin about your structure, unless u dress up in glitter
im feeling it.....
Imma keep this plain n simple, sorta like the concepts u'll use
Cuz you join date says it all, the other reps already been abused
ook...
confusin? pimpin on the street the only way your shit sales
& I dont hear cops, S'why listen to a fucker wearin pig tails
eeh but oook ending....

decent verse....




I'll cut you from your throat to your knees, & I beat stupid fucks that try & plead,
With no one rushing to Band-Aid..... 'cuz the majority would RATHER see you bleed.
nice start....
Antonio? Yo, homie blows... See this dope verse? Well I keyed it..
And your path of wreckage is so fucking small it took just three wins to complete it.
decent ...
Free agent? This weak patient aint nothin' I'd try & seek,
'Cuz this^ will just be what people say when you get kidnapped & beaten for weeks.
decent...
Quick with a verse? Must've, But I been bustin' up whores dude,
And being On-line so much....
Might make me slip through that poor structure of yours too.
aight..
But I won't forget you when your dead, Nah, But I won't be sad by far,
Just my dimensions of aim at your face sorta reminds me of your avatar. ..
aight ending...

you had a more consistent and original verse nice job man...


vote: 2v ez....