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Old 02-17-04, 08:30 PM   #9
Archeologist
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Italy... Your drop was aiight but you didnt realy have any punches, your structure was good but you should concentrate on punches more..you opener was wack (diks get played to much), closer was ok though.....
Fiorz... your drop was better because you had everything such as hard hittin Punches and good wordplay.. your structure was aiight but a lil bit scratchy.......

\/ote.... Fiorz
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