Originally Posted by Given Light

This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing
Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing
Not bad, streched though...5/10
Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters
Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder
Hahaha, good meta...7/10
How can you even think about judging someone else......
When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf
No....3/10
Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill
So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill
Not bad, second line streched...6/10
And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips
Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped....
Second Line = Played...but it's not bad....6/10


Word.

Overall: 27/50

Originally Posted by Tephlon

lol, check it........

kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines
The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes
Streched...but eh...good attempt...4/10
fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire
thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR
Good idea, but used bad vocab...6/10
your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it..
dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it''
Eh....5/10
u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On
this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One
Nice Punch....7/10
cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round...
ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds..
Nice Meta....6/10
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WORD.

Overall 28/50