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Old 04-25-07, 10:11 PM   #9
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BRANDON CIELASEK
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You've got a nice family dude, but see...never was something so wrong
If somebody's got a ton of shit to do...they're describing fucking your mom
This was a decent concept. Wording wasn't the best, but I liked this. 1.5/2
Your mom has been through so much dude, she isn't a rapper mind ya
But listen up...I can tell that she has got some nice flow....from her vagina
Nah... won't feelin this. 0.5/2
You stooped so low dude, much like your mom's did, so yeah it's fine
So watch as my skills triple D's....without sagging like your mom's tit's guy
Weak way of wording it, but decent word/nameplay. 1/2
Dude if you're mom had flaming hair, I would be real deep in the red
N when I say her life looks Grim....I slept with her and STD's cause death
Shit, wasn't feelin this either. 0.5/2
Bitch has been around like a bike for 10 children, we all got a ride, sir
She makes me feel at home....her pussy's so big I built my house inside her
A big pussy isn't neccesarily a bad thing, so... 0.5/2

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DIZZY
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shawtys are feelin DiZzy. im thought cute by most
im not even close to ugly. your mom lives on a different coast
Nah, I've seen this multiple times. 0.5/2
you even used a sagg line are you insane!
when ya mommas tits sag lower then jibb'z chains
Feeding? Anyways, this shit was too basic. 0.5/2
i aint into freak shit, wit ya momz i wasnt tryna get lucky
i only used handcuffs so the ugly bitch wouldn't tryn touch me
Wording was way off. I'll give points for the concept. 1/2
n thats fact. not until she does some hurdles
truth is ya momma couldnt feel DiZzy if she ran in circles
This could be seen as a self-diss, depending on how you look at it. 0.5/2
i dont know why u deny she a hoe,, cuz to my knowledge
the bitch has even been done more than this weeks topic
Ehhh... Nah, the whole concept of a hoe is played. 0.5/2

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VOTE: BRANDON CIELASEK
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