Seems Like You've Got A Good Flow Here Man..Your Structure Was Cool Well Structure On RV Don't Count No More..But Your Emotion Was Solid Which Is Good In A Piece Like This It'll Open Up Your Mind To See Alot Of Things That Happend Even The Mother Womb Part I Liked That Part Cause It Opened My Mind And Made Me Think About My Mother And What She Went Through To Have Me..And All The Pain A Caused Her...But Your Rhyme Scheme Very Nice Man Alot Of This Here I Can Feel..The Ending Was Perfect Couldn't Of Think Of A Better Way To Say It...Although You Had Some Errors In Here, Like Sometime The Words Wouldn't Rhyme Well Like Punishment And That Word Before It...But Very Good Piece Man Can't Wait Till You Get It Up On Audio....I'm Looking Forward To Collabing With An Emcee Such As Yourself

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