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Old 11-08-07, 09:56 PM   #11
HELLonEARTH
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Voted For: Cannabarz-K.O.R

Alright, alright. Mediocre battle at best.

Cannabarz: Alright, you had nice multi-syllable rhyme set, but your punches are simple. I mean the lines are complex, but your hits could be directed at anyone. Feed off his weaknesses. Do something more creative.
Score: 6

C-Bo: It was a decent set, nothing to complex, the best line was the Myspace one, other than that it's really basic. It works, just not against anyone with more than a basic grasp of metaphors and rhyme complexity.
Score: 5.5

Get ya weight up. Much love.
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