I have bob taking this with ease...monkey you need to structure it line for line not paragraph for an easier more read for the readers nah mean... also your whole putting it like a text battle shit is out of place try to just write it ou homie with correct spellin and a better slang if need be homie... but i understood your story and it was nice but your flow was a bit off nah mean.. bob was more direct with what he wanted to go about on the creativity tip so yea man...

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