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Old 01-04-05, 07:05 PM   #8
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From: chi-town
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Chrits best lines:
This kid is wack as fuck, forget how it sounds
I'll leave to a round of applause, you're left applauded w/ rounds

And we know its comin, Ya known for words been bitten
So I'll collect enough chips from ya teeth, to play poker with em

And ya audios are wack as fuck, full of static and such
Even ya hairline must be jealous of ya skill receding so much
^^all some nice lines....... i luv ur metas, i thought they were creative... and well written these bars not too bad, was aight, the attack of the clones bar wasn't too bad either, kinda funny but coulda been worded better..

Led Poetic:
^Fuck that was played, but ya know it'll still be curses
Cuz if I've bit, then everyone nose a familar face in ya verses

He can feel the loss comin, Chrit was just trimming weight
When every Single line in ya verse was too ugly for any dates
^nice personal........ ha omg

^Voters might not get it...but they can get a vision in mental
Cuz they'll secret stashed....
And I aint talkin late night comedy central...
best closer coulda been worded better, however..

I was feeling your word play this time, Led Poetic, both y'all verses weren't too strong.. however, the one who took this slightly happened to be Led.. u had better personals although u coulda worded it better fa real.. i wasn't feelin sum of the played lines that Rdot had.. like the tv and channeling one..
v/ Led Poetic
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