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Old 08-09-08, 01:32 AM   #13
El Taco
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Quit actin up like I need massive luck, Jack’s a nut, plus Kirk is ass and sucks
Yo Lay! You really oughtta let the oil prices drop before you gas him up
Blazin the set? This cheap dummy's as played as it gets & a flavourless noob
Whose verses are sooooo old fashioned
..they should rock leather jackets & gator skin shoesPlus your ass is gay, it’s no wonder why bitches aint nailin him
And are more scared to get tongued then Lieutenant Ripley was in Alien
U won't ever get ya fling on unless I help you out, I swear I’m a pimp!
Besides I see you need some training brah
since that’s what chicks u get wear on their tits

JT, not too bad man, flowed great, which some people say doesn't exist in text, but fuck, a smooth read man... for consistency and efficiency, kinda thought you bogged her in the middle, had a couple bars which didn't really hit because they just didn't go with the rest of the verse, honestly that pet line was garbage, lol, 3 bars in the middle kinda ruined it for me.

to start off, opener was not bad, but you stretched a bit far.

Bro, you think you got fans but your performance causes rooms to be empty,
With only one bitch on the floor screamin' "JOSHUA... sorry excuse for an MC,"
And lmao at you crying about a no-show. That just proves you're a sore gay,
I ain't seen a bitch fit that bad since your chick tried to step through a doorway,
And as for no-shows? You'll debate that they're scared to fuck with a fine, g,
Don't worry faggot, I'll face you... Just for the fact that I don't trust you behind me,
And Jacks a late bloomer. All the bitches deny you cause you're weak and slow,
Shit... You only JUST now tore up a Taco for the first time three weeks ago

^^yeah, the next bar was forced wordplay, just so you know

there was a couple more quotables, but overall i think kirk finished off stronger/consistent... honestly i thought JT would've had it, but some of his punches i just didn't like, he didn't keep to dissin' kirk straight up, which i think kirk took the advantage in... personals

close match, i'm taking kirk though.
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