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Old 12-19-03, 11:37 PM   #10
RahWerk.
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13th:

Beat is fuckin dope. Intro o fu talkin is ok. Whoa, i'm feeling ur flow.. But, u need to up ur emotion, at points u sounded dead.. Delivery needs work, quality is nice.. Lyrics are nice, i'm feeling the topic.. Stayed on topic.. But, u lacked emotion..it was ok..

7.1/10

M.O.C:

Beat is ok.. Quality needs madd work, i could hear pops. You fell off beat sometimes, but came back.. Delivery is ok..Emotion is their... I think rappin about killin u rgirl, and girl problems isn't under the category, Divided into time..oh wait.... i heard the ending..ok..Ok, this was ok..

6.4/10

13TH gets this by a hair, wasn't not much difference.