fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters
^This was pretty wack.

when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals
^This was pretty wack too.

but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him
^I thought this was alright.

so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps
^Haha. Kinda funny, but kinda played,

cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
^Stretched as shit and not that great.

don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath
^Lmao.You fuckin' douche. This was funny though.

lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting
^Nah, man.

i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week
^About as good as his closer.




I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.
^I thought this was pretty wack.

I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.
^I thought this was pretty wack.

Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.
^This was alright. Kind of forced wordplay.

save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.
^This was pretty wack too.

after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.
^This was pretty wack too, dude.

I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.
^Dude. What the fuck?

just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.
^Again, what the fuck?

I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.
^I guess this was alright compared to the rest of it.



I'll critique Flight's verse first. I had you in the end with about 2 lines that I liked. Some of your lines were pretty shitty though. Both of your decent lines made me laugh so that's always a plus. But besides those few lines, it was a pretty bad verse. Once again, it lookedl like you put barely any time into it. Wow at Lay. This verse reminds me of the one you dropped a few weeks ago. I could barely get through it, man. It was just really boring. Most of the wordplay you used was just kind of dumb. You ended up with only 1 line that I really liked. I don't know if you just thought you'd easily take this and dropped shit or what. Both of your lines were about as crappy as each others but with Flight coming with 2 decent lines I'm giving it to him. Maybe it's just me. I thought Lay's verse was not a good read at all, and it was almost a chore to read it. Alot of concepts that could have been used to make a good punch and wasted, or just played concepts without a fresh flip. I don't know, man. I wanna see what everybody else thinks.

V/Flight

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