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Old 08-16-08, 07:00 PM   #9
Brydon
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fuck this pussy, why even bother with it, we all know i'm better
shit i didn't notice who i was battling, i just read the threads first 4 letters

NOT GOOD.........................

when i compete i'm a surething, but your punchlines are just never on the level
cause you have more hopefuls in a row, than Canada's only shot at some medals

DID'NT LIKE...............

but dont get me wrong, i love my country, but you... i have my doubts in
i dont care if we have an Army or not... since you've already talked enough about him

NOT GREAT...................

so the predictions, nothing but jokes... i can spit dope whenever i fucking want
see i know i can do better than Lay Fear... i'll throw in a few dozen stomps

DID'NT LIKE EITHER..............SORRY JUS NOT FEELIN IT SO FAR.......

cause i know for a fact you'll go down fag, so i dont mind what these deadbeats say
the whole fucking league can pre-dick you to win, you'll get some from your boyfriend anyways
OK JUS COULD'A BEEN WORDED BETTER................

don't deny you're tight with the champ, and as mod, i no longer wonder chief
see the one reason Kirk's stays on top... because Lay prefers it underneath

LOL THAT WAS FUNNY..............

lay knows he's bad with the ladies, no moves and they all scream the sex stinks
so when I blow a few quick lines in a couple minutes... i at least keep it to my texting

NOT TOO BAD...............

i stepped over you once man, and twice, well thats no big feat
cause EVERYONE in the league said i can drop hot... so the best to you next week

NAH..........

VS

I disperse the clout, devour this faggot just so its known who hurt him now.
an if he makes me eat my Words.. its cuz I consider him my Verbs an Nouns.

LIKE BUT MAYBE NOT SURE SEEN THIS BEFORE.................

I seen who ya rep in ya sig, an now I'm embarrassed to be in this dispute dude
only thing he proved.. the Establishment doesn have the same depth it USE TO.

YEAH THIS WAS COO..............

Taco's chick proved he had a little dick, so I wish you'd just face it you liar.
I know it scares you.. that ya girl would STILL Terrify eased my way inside her.

PRETTY LAME TO BE HONEST..............

save it, an admire..don't try an be Luda cuz you should know this is practice.
Act a fool?'.. you alrleady are stuffed from bein bloated with whackness.

NOT GREAT..............

after readin all that played shit, seems ya got me down an bein lazy.
if it isn't Flight in rare form..then its prolly the weak Taco we been seein lately.

OK BUT NOT TOO GOOD................

I can see your shakin, maybe your intimidated..but kill you? the hook might
so watch him present tense..showin us all Right Now what scared stiff looks like.

YEAH OK................

just wait till this bitch meets the end of his rope, cuz my rhythmn is sickly.
I usually prep for all my tough matches..so that explains why I didn't this week.

NOT GOOD.............

I'm glossin ma belts..you'll get walked over cuz now I'll be tossing some welts
walk a day in my shoes..then h'ed have to figure out how to stomp on himself.

NOT A BAD FINISHER.............


OK BOTH SEEMED PRETTY BAD WORK FROM WHAT I HAVE READ OF YOUR PREVIOUS WORK, SO UNLESS ITS CAUSE IM FUCK TIRED FROM WORK TODAY, I SAY YOU BOTH ALREADY KNEW THIS. EL TACO YOU HAD SOME MAJOR BAD LINES MIXED IN ON YOUR VERSE,DIDNT SEEM TO PUT ALOT OF EFFORT MATBE OR TIME INTO IT.EL TACO YOU ALSO SEEMED TO HAVE TOO MANY STRETCHED PUNCHES WHICH ENDED UP WITH THERE BEING NO EFFECT TO THEM AS A RESULT.LAY I WOULD SAY YOU HAD THE BETTER OF THE PUNCHES AND YOUR VERSE WAS BETTER PUT TOGETHER BUT NOT THE GREATEST.SORRY KIRK BUT THE FUNNIEST LINE WAS THE KIRK BEING UNDERNEATH(NO HATE).THAT SHIT DID MAKE ME GIGGLE SUM.SO OVERALL I GIVE MY VOTE TO LAY SIMPLY COZ HE HAD A FEW MORE BETTER PUNCHES AND HIS BAD ONES WAS'NT AS BAD AS EL TACO'S.ALSO LAY'S WAS BETTER PUT TOGETHER AND WORDED.BUT NEITHER PIECE AWOKE ME FROM MY NEARLY ASLEEP MIND SET RIGHT NOW.

VOTE-LAY

PEACE
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