This was decentish. I don't really like the topic... but the mid section, particulary this part:

Were Sucker's. Just Tossing our Flow's In the Air..
So anyOne here. Can Take it then Rap it and Record saying it's There's..
Who really Needs a Crew. Especially when Some Are in Two..
Two Face Bitches in real Life. And i Guess it's here on the InterNet Too..

I liked that... end was dope too... but i wasnt really impressed towards the beginning.... and after that dope part... you started saying "white guys cant say dude"... i mean... wtf.... i can say bro, dude, yo, sup whatever i want to... doesnt mean im trying to be black...

Lyrically, this was good... mostly consistent multies, vocab wasnt bad... some more metaphors could have helped

Structure was particularly nice... like the flow and the way it was set out....

Overall = 7.5/10

Keep writing, this was good... try to use some of the things i mentioned... i'll check your next open mic... you getting a nice start at RB (unless your an older member who made a new account)...

Check out my collab with FormulaMC called "The Origins Of The Two"... peace