Liquor Of Tears-You was a lil bit imaginery and you had a few good Vocab and I liked it how you worded it and stuff and its mainly on topic...Structure was decent and stayed focused

Mental Anew-You came close and your vocab killed it but You was close with LoT but mainly he had like a slight better you then telling it

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