ok everything was nice except for the flow. i felt it coulda been better. send me that track and i'll show u what i mean. but other than that ya lyrics are dope and ya dynamics were onpoint. just gotta work on ya flow. and i wasnt really feeling the hook. maybe cuz i was looking for something different. it woulda been dope if u had a chick singin the hook in spanish or something. ionno but this was aiight.

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