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Old 10-21-04, 12:13 PM   #11
Verbal Vision
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Vote/Premanition
Aight 3rd your lines were too streched and i really wasnt feeling it you had good Vocab and wordplay but they where combined too basic if u know what i mean...You had a meta which didnt make alot of sense..lol...Ur structure looked kinda rushed...

Premanition you had simple Punches which hit..but not very hard..Your sructure was much easier to follow than 3rd's and the flow was better....You kept even lines & bars..6/10 for ya opener...Ya closer was quite good 8/10....But u clinched this with better Structure Flow and Punches Close battle....Return the votes No hate...