3rd-Shift
even if you regurgitated brocoli on wax ya records still wuldnt b ill
da only way u'll c an MC wit skill is if i was in front of ya an slapped yo grill
naww.. stretched like and elastic.
i already squashed yu once it seems like you dont learn from defeat
so i should kick in ya teeth with my sneaks to yo prohibit ya speech
no no no..
but 3rd times the charm right maybe you'll sneak in a win
BITCH PLEASE that's like Bush n Kerry blowin da race an Nader stealin da win
coulda been decent if worded better.
or a crackhead defyin the odds livin after he OD
preminition in laymes terms YOU HAVE NO CHANCE OF BEATIN ME!!!
LAME
a white flag should be all you wave forget holdin on to ya foolish pride
blind to ya demise yu spittin in this tourney is like committin suicide
not feeling this either.
or rappin utterly tounge tied an chokin to death on ya own saliva
pussies got 9 men got 1 life so that x-plains how u a surviva
prolly the only bars i liked of your verse.
i work 360 degrees around you try to get a clear shot
i spit circles around you nigga the truth is that im hott an yu nott
weak close.

verse was dry, stretched bars flow was very iffy.
mostly played concepts or attempts at weak ones.
nothin stood out in the verse to me at all.
really gotta work on the wording.

Premanition
claims knowledge 2 hip hop yet questions if ja's hot or not?...(1)
u talk alot but turn away the challenge if its not from ur 'spot'...(2)
ehhh..
examin ur defeats see theres plenty to even ur wins at twenty...
awareness must be empty cos that ain't flowin wiv barz so lengthy...
liked the second line cause its true.
beta than you? even ya 'dumb' avatar ‘noddin’ the answer too...
no punches puttin bricks on ya fists n u stil don’t follow through…
not feelin in.
3rd how you gonna post threads that ya mouths contradictin?…(3)
not normal 2 follow instructions but I’ll do wot peeps predictin…
ehh.
since ur shadowed arrival you’ll find u’ve always bin behind…
fuck bein out of ur league………..you were out of ur ‘mynd’...(4)
best bar of the battle.

verse was ehh.
nothin great came with the odd played concept.
had the best bar of the battle which was the close,
also liked the lengthy bars line.

v/Premanition
had the better verse.
had the better punches
structure was good too.

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