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Old 10-21-04, 11:17 PM   #15
Mistic-Rogue
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From: New Zealand
IP:

even if you regurgitated brocoli on wax ya records still wuldnt b ill
da only way u'll c an MC wit skill is if i was in front of ya an slapped yo grill
Weak Intro
i already squashed yu once it seems like you dont learn from defeat
so i should kick in ya teeth with my sneaks to yo prohibit ya speech
HAHAHA, nice line, flow was a bit off though
but 3rd times the charm right maybe you'll sneak in a win
BITCH PLEASE that's like Bush n Kerry blowin da race an Nader stealin da win
Ryming win with win, naaaa, flow was crook aswell
or a crackhead defyin the odds livin after he OD
preminition in laymes terms YOU HAVE NO CHANCE OF BEATIN ME!!!
MMMMM, not bad, average punch
a white flag should be all you wave forget holdin on to ya foolish pride
blind to ya demise yu spittin in this tourney is like committin suicide
Naaa, weak punch
or rappin utterly tounge tied an chokin to death on ya own saliva
pussies got 9 men got 1 life so that x-plains how u a surviva
Average punch, not bad, god idea, needed better execution
i work 360 degrees around you try to get a clear shot
i spit circles around you nigga the truth is that im hott an yu nott
Na weak closer

Overall didnt like ya verse mate, punches were a bit weak and it was a bit boring

claims knowledge 2 hip hop yet questions if ja's hot or not?...(1)
u talk alot but turn away the challenge if its not from ur 'spot'...(2)
Nice intro
examin ur defeats see theres plenty to even ur wins at twenty...
awareness must be empty cos that ain't flowin wiv barz so lengthy...
HAHA, nice multies and funny punch
beta than you? even ya 'dumb' avatar ‘noddin’ the answer too...
no punches puttin bricks on ya fists n u stil don’t follow through…
Weakish punch
3rd how you gonna post threads that ya mouths contradictin?…(3)
not normal 2 follow instructions but I’ll do wot peeps predictin…
Ha, nice!!
since ur shadowed arrival you’ll find u’ve always bin behind…
fuck bein out of ur league………..you were out of ur ‘mynd’...(4)
HAHAHA, very nice closer!

Vote goes to preminition, much better verse here!! Punches were Better and your verse didnt put me to sleep it had me reading! Good job man!