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Lay Fear
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I hate when my house falls inferior to someone else's,... the point is dumb
even if its potentially better..people often complain n' CG sighs..join the 'club'..
Ehh... concept coulda been used much better. So-so. 1/2
now your in the clear..with your houses outside appearance..its fit for conduct
every1 goes with the wood finish..ur jus the first to use it as a finished product
Pretty decent flip, but not entirely true. 1/2
ya mom sucks, n ya need a 'Gateway' for that driveway..we shoulda showed him
we'll 'monitor' ya progress..so call us when ya lawns r big enuff for us to 'modem'
The quotations are unneccesary. Very basic wordplay, but points for the effort, and staying on topic. 1/2
all that money has got ya gassed up..I'm guessin its gone, I'll jus scar ya mind..
n I agree ya driveway is superior...but atleast I can afford to park a car in mine.
So, how is his superior?? Blah. 0.5/2
ya far from fine..ya could probably sparr in time, rep ya shelter?.this dikes chicken
was a nice home..but from the pic looks like ya 'scrambled away'..like 'a Vick did'..
Definitely lose the quotes. Better wording would've made this dope, cuz I've never seen the evicted wordplay. But, the concept overall was blah. 1/2
your gone..ya got nowhere to go..ya mom's occupation?she aint' fit for datin son
far as ya roof goes?..guessin that where ya mom derives her inspiration from.
Hmmm... What's her ocupation got to do with it? And plus, this is really dissin her, not really the house. 0.5/2

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Civilized Gangsta
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Fear, your really lost in the woods with this one. no doubt!
And you'll never live in the fast lane bitch, ya got no house.
REALLY basic, could've been dissin any house. 0.5/2
Ya know what they say bout dudes n big trucks n small ego's
On a scale from 1 ta 10, buildin houses...they all zero
Ehhh... wtf? Nah... 0.5/2
Why the fuck you need 6 windows?....in a forest
Seriously, thats probably why ya so mental...And just borin
Read the second line... that's the punch? And how is it dissin the house? 0.5/2
How Tha fuck u get to ya front poorch, that involves a goal
Cuz every time you put ya next foot forward, you fall in a hole
This definitely had potential, decent by itself. 1/2
Construction? shiiiiiit I don't mean to knock ya boots off
BUT
that whole fuckin things at a slant dude, its NOT JUST ya rooftop
It's really just a statement, and there's really no need for the "BUT", but this is barely ok. 1/2
Dude's short for words, and you still can't figure it out kid
Really..... makin them moves, just not buildin ya house yet
Wow, the wording in this was pretty bad. Your concepts are decent, just the way you word them is weak. 0.5/2

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VOTE: LAY FEAR
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