Wow, ok.

This was a TOPICAL piece, not poetry, and that was a shockingly bad review from someone with 5000+ posts on this board. When you reply to an open mic, you're supposed to comment on things like the topic, the vocab, the imagery and the rhyme scheme. Otherwise you're basically just typing generic statments and leaving no constructive criticism. Do you do this often?

And don't let MY post count fool you fella, go to rapbattles.com and have a look around.